Rejection

I sent the agent the package in April and immediately began looking for a response. Weeks passed. I heard nothing. I'd began to wonder it she was ever going to get back to me when I found the thick envelope in my mailbox. It wasn't good. The kindest thing she said was that while she didn't usually like prologues, mine really grabbed her. In her words..."unfortunately, it went downhill from there." She did say I had a great voice "but the writing is trite and full of clichés" and "reads like a first draft."